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Please, leave a comment if you speak fluent German and you feel the dialogue still seems funky.
-Big Mike.
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01-18-24
Dear False Positive Readers,
This is Ashley Walton, Mike’s sister and editor of False Positive. I have really terrible, awful news and a tiny bit of good news.
You might have noticed it’s been a couple years since we’ve posted anything on this website. Well, brace yourself for the saddest update I’ll ever share.
(But apparently I can read ancient Greek 😉 )
Fashion doesn’t change much in 2000 years
nazis…..
No… Wehrmacht soldiers.
this webcomic as a whole is afantstic series with really great art and clever story lines. as a lover of short stories and comics/graphic novels this site is one of my favorite internet haunts and on ei look forward to seeing
Oh, they are sooooooo screwed…
He upgraded his house but not his clothes? There’s a lesson in that: robes are comfy.
And then he pees on them!
Chances are, two legged pigs’ll end up as four legged pig’s food…
More illegal aliens to deal with… hopefully the old man and his daughter are able to find out how Nazi’s taste.
oooh this aughta be good!
Joel: That guy looks so young and fit after all of these centuries. Aliens are just full of healthy vitamins and minerals. Eat your aliens, kiddies, if you want to grow up strong and healthy.
– or if you don’t want to grow up at all. I bet his daughter is still a girl.
So… eat your aliens if you want to be a little girl?
Not sure what to say to that Adam…
I like the twisted place this is going…I sure didn’t see this coming…LOL.
Oookay, I guess it IS about the man and his daughter.
Wow didn’t expected that, I was really surprised when I realized they’re talking german! But that’s really cool and everythings right 😀
Nazis! Their flavor is not unlike chicken.
I certainly hope that they don’t eat the nazis, not even the spaceship’s effect could protect them from ingesting something that rotten.
Remember, you have to freeze time for space travel…These two are still
within minutes of foursome one eye opening his hatch…even if two millennia have passed for the surroundings, the pigs are still two years old, the girl nine and hubby thirty five…
Eh? First of, what makes you think that all this has to do with time travel, and they are frozen in their own time? Wouldn’t the old man be surprised by the people stopping by their hut, the Romans and the Nazis? And where would he have built the house from hut to villa in just a few minutes?
Also: “hubby”? The girl called him “father” a few pages back. Also also: He looks older than thirty-five, even for back then.
Looks alrightish to me, coild have been worded a bit less stiff, but its in no way wrong, though however often I hit refresh, the text does not change a bit.
Should it still? Pr was that only for the “betaed” German?