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Constriction Page 17

Constriction Page 17

on 2012/09/05
Chapter: Comics
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  1. Kai
    Kai
    2012/09/05, 1:59 AM | # | Reply

    Well that escalated quickly…

  2. Mister Morphine
    Mister Morphine
    2012/09/05, 2:04 AM | # | Reply

    Is this gonna go on forever, sucking everything in its path, until there’s nothing left? o___o

  3. itzaviv
    itzaviv
    2012/09/05, 2:13 AM | # | Reply

    Well, that’s that, then. Goodbye everything.

  4. Jim
    Jim
    2012/09/05, 2:21 AM | # | Reply

    I hope he made it to cape canaveral in time šŸ˜‰

  5. Vox in a Box - voxboxcomics.com
    Vox in a Box - voxboxcomics.com
    2012/09/05, 3:10 AM | # | Reply

    I know there’s no sound in space, but why do I keep hearing a child getting the last bit of milk from from the bottom with a straw?

  6. The other ghost girl
    The other ghost girl
    2012/09/05, 3:40 AM | # | Reply

    Wow

  7. Colin Alexander
    Colin Alexander
    2012/09/05, 4:16 AM | # | Reply

    Wow. I love how this story’s started small and ending huge. I wonder if the twist to this story is that there is no twist, just good old fashioned end-of-the-world silence.

  8. pietrov
    pietrov
    2012/09/05, 4:56 AM | # | Reply

    Well, earth is screwed

  9. alexceratiAlexCer
    alexceratiAlexCer
    2012/09/05, 5:11 AM | # | Reply

    Is this the end of Season 1? What a cliffhanger!

    • Bellar
      Bellar
      2012/09/05, 5:46 AM | # | Reply

      What cliffhanger? Everyone dies and the Earth is gone.
      That’s about as final as it gets.

  10. PsiRockin
    PsiRockin
    2012/09/05, 5:13 AM | # | Reply

    This is getting out of hand..

  11. Sigurther
    Sigurther
    2012/09/05, 6:05 AM | # | Reply

    Oh no! It’s a Hawking Hole! Anyone wanna play Dungeons & Dragons for the next quadrilion years? I just rolled up a tenth level vice president…

    • Ridlight
      Ridlight
      2012/09/05, 9:51 AM | # | Reply

      You’re my favorite.

    • Thamnos
      Thamnos
      2012/09/06, 10:27 AM | # | Reply

      Lol’ed so hard to that…

  12. Bellar
    Bellar
    2012/09/05, 6:37 AM | # | Reply

    Neat Earth devouring scenes aside, this is looking to be one of the more boring endings of all the stories so far, I feel. The other stories all had a much smaller and more personal scale to them, with conclusions that were open to continuation in some way, which implied that they were merely part of an ongoing or greater story. The mystery of what led up to the events of the story and what followed its ending are a big part of what makes these stories so interesting.

    If this doesn’t end with everyone dead and the Earth gone however, I’ll happily eat my words.

    • Jim
      Jim
      2012/09/05, 7:31 AM | # | Reply

      I hope you are soooooooooo wrong !! šŸ™‚ My bet is nobody really died !

    • Doc
      Doc
      2012/09/05, 8:41 AM | # | Reply

      i like to think the crepe woman was oprah’s daughter and this is how an angry god lays waste to the world

    • wolfflaarcen
      wolfflaarcen
      2012/09/05, 1:03 PM | # | Reply

      Even if this particular story does end with everyone dead and the world gone, who is to say that’s necessarily THE END? This is False Positive we’re talking about here!

    • Ashley
      Ashley
      2012/09/05, 1:50 PM | # | Reply

      Well what’s that… thingy… that’s coming outta the earth? Looks like some sorta alien space pod to me

      • Stephen S.
        Stephen S.
        2012/09/05, 2:29 PM | # | Reply

        That’s the moon being broken up & devoured.

  13. gavicus
    gavicus
    2012/09/05, 8:04 AM | # | Reply

    Oh, I don’t know–It’s a good way to end your entire comic series with a bang… or more like with a ffffffffthhhwip!

  14. Zee
    Zee
    2012/09/05, 8:37 AM | # | Reply

    Then he wakes up from the nightmare, looks at her sleeping, and is like ‘Frig this, I don’t think I want to propose to her after all! Her crepes made her turn into a black hole!’, packs his stuff, and sneaks out while she is sleeping…

  15. Puk's Soliloquy
    Puk's Soliloquy
    2012/09/05, 9:04 AM | # | Reply

    So far i find this story to be pretty dry, i don’t feel as connected to it as I normally do. I’m still waiting for the story to start.

  16. Deacon AL
    Deacon AL
    2012/09/05, 10:41 AM | # | Reply

    I loves this show…but the radiation and gravity fluxes should have killed everyone by now…..

  17. Adam_K
    Adam_K
    2012/09/05, 10:46 AM | # | Reply

    So there is a … “negative”, an opposite world? She was a portal to somewhere else?

  18. Equinox
    Equinox
    2012/09/05, 11:01 AM | # | Reply

    You think their doc would be offended if they got a second opin… um… oh… nevermind.

  19. Hailey Brown
    Hailey Brown
    2012/09/05, 3:46 PM | # | Reply

    Maybe the stories are finnaly coming together, and the god from detained is doing something? Teaching her disciple?
    No..probably not. But I wonder when that will eventually happen, or if it will never happen at all.
    It’s great either way.

    It could be the start of a new universe? Like the big bang?

  20. Daniel Govar
    Daniel Govar
    2012/09/05, 5:54 PM | # | Reply

    I always make slurping/sucking noises when I look at this page. šŸ™‚

  21. IrinAkae
    IrinAkae
    2012/09/05, 7:28 PM | # | Reply

    God is vacuum cleaning?

  22. Joe
    Joe
    2012/09/05, 7:42 PM | # | Reply

    First panel…streaming clouds look like a clawed hand reaching for the hole, very cool.

  23. Coyote
    Coyote
    2012/09/05, 7:47 PM | # | Reply

    I am _not_ cleaning that up.

    • MidnightDStroyer
      MidnightDStroyer
      2021/02/07, 1:49 AM | # | Reply

      No problem. The mess is sweeping itself up.
      When it’s done, the only thing left for you to do is turn off the light & lock the door behind you as you leave.

  24. Leewei
    Leewei
    2012/09/05, 9:49 PM | # | Reply

    Both beautiful and horrific.

    For anyone interested in the science-y side of things, this singularity isn’t behaving much like I’d expect a black hole to behave. Here’s why:

    *A gravitational singularity doesn’t have any more mass than what it started with prior to collapse. The poor woman who set off this change of events weighed very little compared to everything near her. The pull her mass exerted on nearby mass would be all but negligible — perhaps twice as much as normal for those nearby. Matter nearby simply wouldn’t pass over her incredibly small gravitational radius.

    *The moon is roughly 10 diameters of the Earth in its orbit. While the gravity from the singularity is no doubt pulling it in from its orbit, the Earth itself would fall into it at the same rate. (Objects with different mass fall equally fast — bigger objects just hit proportionately harder.)

    *As others have pointed out, singularities will evaporate over time into high-energy radiation.

    Having said this, part of the horror here is that something incredibly powerful is happening that is breaking what we think of as the rules. I’m looking forward to Friday’s update.

  25. Nathan Jameson
    Nathan Jameson
    2012/09/06, 4:49 AM | # | Reply

    …but did the orange car escape?

    • Sigurther
      Sigurther
      2012/09/06, 7:36 AM | # | Reply

      Naw, it got sucked in a few pages ago while we were still on the streets outside the hospital. Its being orange didn’t save it from the blue collapse. Hey, maybe that’s what this is. Not a black hole, but the start of a vacuum collapse where they universe collapses into a more stable state.

      • Nathan Jameson
        Nathan Jameson
        2012/09/07, 4:53 AM | # | Reply

        I was making a joke. šŸ˜›

  26. Thamnos
    Thamnos
    2012/09/06, 10:29 AM | # | Reply

    At first i hoped that our wretched scientific mishap of a species ends up like that, without even a chance to repent, but then i thought of the rest of the species that don’t deserve to get that >.< I keep dreaming though…

  27. Ashley
    Ashley
    2012/09/06, 3:59 PM | # | Reply

    “Damn it Carl what did I tell you about leaving the vaccum on?! See what you’ve done!? You’ve destroyed ANOTHER world! And I worked *hard* on this one, too!”

    • Hailey Brown
      Hailey Brown
      2012/09/06, 6:04 PM | # | Reply

      This deserves a slow clap.

  28. Bishop
    Bishop
    2012/09/06, 9:52 PM | # | Reply

    So … ummm … that really sucks.

  29. Sidus
    Sidus
    2012/09/10, 11:02 AM | # | Reply

    This deserves to be a wallpaper, specially the part with the moon being sucked.

  30. Axel
    Axel
    2015/03/30, 5:02 PM | # | Reply

    Aaaand that’s why I don’t make crepes

  31. chochiakawaltergomez
    chochiakawaltergomez
    2018/02/23, 5:07 PM | # | Reply

    This is some SCP-Foundation levels of HOLYSHITWHATISTHAT :V

    • MidnightDStroyer
      MidnightDStroyer
      2021/02/07, 1:55 AM | # | Reply

      XK Class, End of the World Scenario…Check!
      At least this is an anomaly that’s trying to keep itself contained…

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